I get that but I meant for your preview I am not saying it's bad but I think it'd be cleaner and more professional to add a white background. I really enjoy your art I like that you come up with new concepts (new creatures ).
Wow, Fire looks both cool and cute in your style. The smooth shading, highlights on the armor, the purple glow... I like this chibi drawing a lot! Also, it's great that you've drawn her not static, but in a kind of motion. That suits her just perfectly!
By the way, I find it a bit ironic that you've done this commission after drawing an artwork including stars and space nebula.
Awwwwwwww Well I hope you write it soon! I can't wait to hear about them! It's a really unique looking species and I think it could become very popular in the IZ community if you finished a ref sheet for them.